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A price too high.....
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 09:52:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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What’s the point of it all?
What makes it all worthwhile?
I’ve lost everything to this
My life, my home and now my art
I simply have nothing left to give
Because while you comfort
You also take away
And while you create
You also destroy
I never planned on this
Straddling the while line
Between love and hate
I need your smile
And your comforting hand
I need your love
And you next to me at night
But I need myself as well my love
I need to be who I am
Because without myself I am no one
And if I am no one, then we are nothing
You’ve given me more than I can return
I could never count the smiles
Or all the memories you’ve brought me
But I can count the pains
And there’s but one
The pain you created
When you took my soul
Your share in this package deal
But I can pay you no more my dear
Because now the price is just too high
Even a lifetime of happiness isn’t worth this
Losing and forgetting who I am
Because even though I’d never be alone
You’d be sleeping with a corpse at night
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Re: A price too high.....
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 10:05:46 AM AEST
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Wow....quite a painful and emotional write.. The situation seems to be beyond repair, but perhaps when you find yourself again, you can give it another try?? Good write...
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Re: A price too high.....
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by Saaaraxxx16 on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 10:19:04 AM AEST
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| that was very deep & beautiful! u are so talented |
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Re: A price too high.....
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 11:04:35 AM AEST
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MAJ,
Such pain comes through loud and clear. It is true you must truly find yourself before moving forward with someone else. My best wishes are for you to come to a settling point with this that is a happy one.
Deadwriter
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Re: A price too high.....
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 11:11:03 AM AEST
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Painful to read, I do agree though if you find find yourself fading that is a bad spot in life to be. I was there once, a shadow of the woman I should have been....... truth be told still am growing after all this time has passed.
Hope it works for you another emotional and hard hitting write......
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