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How Can I Tell Him?
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 09:52:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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How can I tell him
what’s in my heart
When I know it isn’t right?
How can I tell him
how happy he makes me
and how I long to see him each day.
How can I tell him
that I’d love to hold his hand
and take a walk with him
along a sandy beach.
How can I tell him
the images I conjure up
when
I see him with someone else
How can I tell him
I wish we could be more than friends
when I know that this
could never be a reality.
How can I tell him
all the things in my heart?
It wouldn’t make a difference anyway
So WHY should I bother?!
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
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2008-04-17 09:52:06]
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Re: How Can I Tell Him?
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by MajesticPoet on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 09:54:58 AM AEST
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How can you not tell him? If you worry only about the negative in what could happen, then you will never allow yourself to be happy. Other then in your mind and dreams. And considering we can not live in a dream world, you have to tell him... Dont leave yourself to second guess. Take the chance.
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Re: How Can I Tell Him?
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by emystar on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 10:14:32 AM AEST
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Whatever will be, will be.
Great writing girl.
It would be my guess that he already knows.
Awesome.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: How Can I Tell Him?
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 10:30:05 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful write. I agree with Emy, I would bet he already knows. Be strong.
Deadwriter
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Re: How Can I Tell Him?
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 11:14:05 AM AEST
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How can you not? I agree follow your heart dear Jen follow your heart.
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Re: How Can I Tell Him?
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by bigdaddyfortwo on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 03:13:00 PM AEST
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| Well written and heartfelt....my favorite kind of poetry. You should bother so that you don't regret later not saying something. |
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Re: How Can I Tell Him?
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by SilverRain on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 06:19:51 PM AEST
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| good write - discriptive and emotional. Enjoyed this read. |
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Re: How Can I Tell Him?
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by ZiggyB on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 08:09:27 PM AEST
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Do bother! Tell him anyway, else you are never to know.
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Re: How Can I Tell Him?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 12:25:59 AM AEST
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Yes...what were you thinking!!! :)
Sometimes when one person follows their heart, it disrupts other hearts along the way. It can be a tough road. I still like the "follow your heart" attitude.....just be oh so careful..... |
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Re: How Can I Tell Him?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 10:50:47 PM AEST
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aw Jenni .. yes, tell him you must! (Us hopeless romantics must stick together!)
What a beautiful torment you've written about. A torment that
I'm sure most have shared at one time or another. Our own eogs
batter us around a lot, don't they? Never let your ego tell your
heart anything it feels is a waste of time or an act of futility. When we
allow our heads to rule us, our hearts fall into the trap of dreamlessness.
And nothing is worse than that. Except maybe the years of "what ifs"
that follow ...
Our hearts are stronger than we give them credit for.
Great write, my friend. ^_^
~Breezy
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Re: How Can I Tell Him?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 01:56:14 AM AEST
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how do you know it wouldnt make a difference....
you'll never know unless you try
....but... great poem
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Re: How Can I Tell Him?
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by Vic on
Thursday, 24th April 2008 @ 12:18:48 PM AEST
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very nice...writing is a great way to console yourself and emerge stronger...
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