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Angels of Fire
Contributed by
Aleph
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Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 09:18:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Opportunities are Angels of Fire
With wings ablaze they come
Streaking towards us at the speed of life
Grab them, you might get burned
Miss them, you’ll never know
Angles of Fire that bring life or death
Those truly alive risk the burns
The rest wait and let the fire fade
The brilliant fire of life
The coldness of existence
Do you stretch out your hands
Or are you just standing there
Waiting
Copyright ©
Aleph
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2008-04-16 21:18:33]
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Re: Angels of Fire
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 05:33:56 AM AEST
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| love the imagery, good write! |
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Re: Angels of Fire
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 09:55:18 AM AEST
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It may not be flowery, but it is indeed fiery! Good write... I look forward to reading more...
Jenni |
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Re: Angels of Fire
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by SilverRain on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 06:29:16 PM AEST
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The brilliant fire of life
The coldness of existence...
stunning. Grabbed me totally!
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