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I don’t know how
Contributed by
SilverRain
on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 07:30:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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How can I give you all of me
when I’m broken on the inside
when emotionally I’m totally wasted
when all I want to do is hide
How can I show you how I feel
if the words just fall apart
if my mind cant perceive what is going on
and I speak with a torn apart heart
I’m so sick of having to be strong
and hunger to find my place where I belong
that now that I found the love of my life
I breathe out
I let go
I relax
But how fair is this on you, my love
Who I smother and try and hold on too
my insecurities take control
make me weak
say things I don’t mean
hurt you with the words I speak
I don’t want to do that
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SilverRain
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2008-04-16 19:30:51]
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Re: I don’t know how
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 06:49:31 AM AEST
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This is deeply touching...I totally enjoyed this.... I can so relate to the 3rd verse.....
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Re: I don’t know how
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 11:12:19 AM AEST
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Great write. If they know where you are coming from and care about you it will help them deal with what is going on. Even the strongest need a time to depend on someone else. It is not weakness, but human nature to interact and have give and take with one another. Keep the writes coming.
Deadwriter
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