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Where are you now?
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 09:48:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sometimes I think of you
and wonder where you are
and if you think of me on lonely nights
or dream about me when there’s nothing left to dream
I don’t expect you to miss me
and I know the phone will never ring
with your voice hanging on the other line
but I have to know
if I’m in your thoughts
or if you forgot about me
like you promised you never would
I can’t bear the thought
of what we shared
being nothing more than a footnote
in a forgotten chapter of your life
and even though I only think of you
during the loneliest hours of the night
Part of me is still hoping
that you’re thinking of me
when I’m busy not thinking of you
So shed not a tear for what we lost
nor heave a sigh for what could have been
Just let me grace your thoughts
when the night hangs long and low
and everything will be right when we awake
in the worlds we’ve created
in the days we’ve been apart
Copyright ©
MajesticPoet
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2008-04-16 09:48:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Where are you now?
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 11:14:16 AM AEST (User
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I understand fully what you have written here. This describes the life many lead. Thank you for posting this.
Deadwriter
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Re: Where are you now?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 11:34:59 AM AEST (User
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Really sad and touching.. Too bad many lack the skills of communication.....myself included
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Re: Where are you now?
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 12:21:41 PM AEST (User
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This is a touching write. One of the hardest things to do is exist within four walls with nothing in between.
I mirror the others thoughts it is all to real.
Been there done that and oh what a sad feeling it is.
Hugsss
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Re: Where are you now?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Aleph on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 09:23:37 PM AEST (User
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I love this poem. I know I've felt that way before and sometimes even still do. I know too keenly what you wrote in your introduction, as well. It captures what we all desire, even after it's over: "think of me, even briefly." That wish for valadation after the fact is wonderfully captured here. |
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Re: Where are you now?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 05:52:00 AM AEST (User
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"Think of me,...think of me fondly..." from a great paly, and this piece reminds me of that.
Well written and I do so you you two work things out. |
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