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like the girl
Contributed by
apartment213
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Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 04:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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here i am expecting just a little bit more
poinntless to parade around rational thinking
sorry to be biased over rated friend i guess
never really had the will to win
bend backwards for endless tales
now im here expecting just a little bit more
styling, mirrors
make good nightmares
did he kiss you
love the makeup
cover up cover up
set 'em all afire
secong guess, such a stress, another mess
here i lay covered with paranoid scabs
now i can loose here die a young man
blame me for everything ill take capitol punishment
find another lover another life let go
thriving in bed jobless downer
here i lay need just a little bit more
morning paper with the news
another face left, one more angel lost
cold solute i loved you cold solute i loved you
feel me i feel you in the air
her i lay wanting just a little bit more
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Re: like the girl
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by MrWrite on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 04:50:19 PM AEST
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| This was a very thought-provoking write. Very emotionally written. |
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Re: like the girl
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 05:14:19 PM AEST
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| very personal... images jump out at me... blessings... |
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Re: like the girl
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 07:27:17 PM AEST
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Good write... I liked this very much
thanks for sharing
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Re: like the girl
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 01:20:46 AM AEST
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wow such passion..." here i am expecting just alittle bit more"... great poem, i love it
Lindsey |
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Re: like the girl
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 05:28:40 AM AEST
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| great expression, i'm sure i did'nt get the full meaning of it but an awful lot of feeling came through in it |
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Re: like the girl
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:07:02 AM AEST
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| you really put a lot into this. very powerful thoughts. |
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Re: like the girl
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 03:11:52 AM AEST
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| very powerful. very deep. this is different than most of the other poems i have read by other people. you have a gift. |
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