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O! America Reverse
Contributed by
MuhammadShanazar
on
Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 12:36:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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My opinions are changed,
My heart lacks fervour,
For you lunched the war,
Purposeless,
To liberate who are already free,
To enrich who are already rich,
To make the fierce, more ferocious.
When will the time intrude you,
Make you see the brilliant aspect of the affair,
And humanity will sing the song of peace?
When will you peep into your inner-self
To see the reflected image of you own?
When will you obey the divine commands
And make out them that God forbids pollution
Smog and fumes of turmoil wrapping His fair Earth?
Now open your eyes
The shores are red;
The lands are coated with blood,
The skulls are scattered like stones,
For the sake of oil or the reserves of gold,
Be aware a single drop of human blood
Possesses more worth than all treasures
That the earth contains.
Now stop killing; enough, enough,
You neither surrender, nor do deprive others
Of the rights which the divine commands allow,
Go through the lanes with moderate bearing.
Live like a benefactor among the nations,
Share with them your victuals,
Stock of knowledge and skills,
And snatch them not of their own.
Return fathers to the orphans,
Husbands to the widows,
Brothers to the waiting damsels,
And sons to the aged mothers,
If not then compensate them all,
For the broken hearts, shattered dreams.
Hatred against you thrives,
Magma against you grows,
Let the volcano sleep,
Beneath the layers deep,
And only once apply,
The strategy of the weapon of love
Discarding the old devices of uranium.
The amount you spent on the arsenal
Would have been enough to feed the world
Though ten times bigger;
If you had ruled the hearts,
The world might have been a different place
Of love, peace and harmony.
Through force your aims will never be gained,
So amend the ways and stroll on the route
That enhances you in respect and esteem;
Review and revise the modes of actions,
Follow not the path that leads the world
To the chaos, and on the point of no return,
For there will be a dark dungeon of curse,
O! America, for the sake of humanity reverse.
Copyright ©
MuhammadShanazar
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2008-04-15 12:36:08]
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Re: O! America Reverse
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by flight_238 on
Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 01:06:37 PM AEST
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| alas, alas, so true about America today. If we'd only stop fighting and try to love, things would be better...good insight, i liked it |
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Re: O! America Reverse
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by jantra on
Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 03:50:28 PM AEST
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| very very well written. one of the best i've seen on this site. the only suggestion i would give is to proofread it to correct numerous grammatical and spelling errors that are distracting focus from the power of your words. Nicely done! excellent! |
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