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Mirror Image
Contributed by
Betchplz1
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Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 12:31:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What do I see whe I look in the mirror?
I see a girl whose cried all her tears
For that one person she loved so much
For the sound of his voice
and the feel of his touch
I see a girl who used to fly
But now all she does is wish she could die
Cause he had convinced her to let everything go
But Hell, what does a mirror know?
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2008-04-15 12:31:52]
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Re: Mirror Image
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by runawaynameless on
Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 01:16:43 PM AEST
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| I know how that feels, have someone convience you of lies... ahh, I hope things get better |
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Re: Mirror Image
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 05:14:38 AM AEST
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| wow...this was incredibly written. I have felt this way before too...but i have never been able to express anything like this so well.. very nicely done...your talent shines through this. |
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Re: Mirror Image
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by xxILoveTheSilencexx on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 09:01:48 PM AEST
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wow that was very good.....I love it......But don't let anyone else tell you who you are.....be what you want to be......and like you said what does a mirror know??
good job |
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