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when the sun blows up
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 04:20:00 PM in AEST
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wrapped in our love, we'll never be cold
darling with you, i'll grow old
'cause we feel the way we love
it alights like the gentlest dove
it's a heart's brightness of light
deep within' we know it's right
and the songbirds keep singin'
like their havin' to give out more
tryin' 'cause they know we're happy
we're lovin' like we've never loved before
together, our heart's soar
each the other we adore
our love will be there
until the end of time
when the sun blows up
and words don't rhyme
*~*
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ladyfawn
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by wolfflow on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 04:44:36 PM AEST
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| beautiful, simply beautiful |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 04:45:58 PM AEST
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absolutely perfect... very true and something for me to remember today... thank you so much for this beautiful poem...
blessings... michele
p.s. thank you so much for your comments on my poems... things look brighter today :) |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 05:00:59 PM AEST
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| I can actually see you writing this one :)...And I can see the smile,warm,loving smile on your face as you pen your heart and soul....Such devotion...Lovely! |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 05:12:48 PM AEST
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| I think I'll put this where I can read it every day ... like an affirmation .... might just sink in eventually ... :)))) thanks Nessa for these nice thoughts this morning. ... Jan |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 05:40:32 PM AEST
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| Truly beautiful,your love shines! Christina |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 05:41:16 PM AEST
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| Truly beautiful,your love shines! Christina |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 06:38:34 PM AEST
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Loved the last line, Ness....:>)
Huggs
Jeni |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 11:46:39 PM AEST
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OMG, this is so beauitiful, I'm at a loss of words, what can I say. Can I have your autograph.
The Phantom |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by venkat on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 01:47:28 AM AEST
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"Alights like the gentlest dove.. its hearts brightness of love.. and the song birds keep singin..together our hearts soar" these beautiful thoughts are excellently studded in this poem. there fore this poem/ poetess is
also real song bird of love. I appreciate you dear Lady. this poem is really very very beautiful. venkat |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by PhantomsLDY on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 03:28:03 AM AEST
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| This is a true affirmation of one's love for another. You are such a wonderful poet. My best to you and yours. Tracie |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by karoody on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 03:00:30 PM AEST
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this is beautiful, nessa! sorry that i haven't been reading much. glad that i finally got the chance. i missed reading your work.
hugs, kara |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by kolbrun on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 07:42:43 AM AEST
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| i liked this. good ending, nice images. well done |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 09:48:37 PM AEST
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This is a very beautiful write Nessa. I'm going to have to read it again. It's soooooo pretty. I enjoy reading your work Nessa.
*S* Cynthia |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by banjo on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:42:09 PM AEST
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hence the problem with starting your poem with someone else's lines: who looks good next to Erica Jong? (psst... try to be more like Erica Jong and less like Shania Twain.)
hope you don't mind the criticism. it's the only way we'll get better. Right? |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 09:55:17 PM AEST
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| umm no, i don't mind the criticism, your comments are somewhat interesting, but let me set you straight, i write my own poetry, i am very respectful of other people's work, and also of my own, which song are you talking about this time? lol, may i suggest you try some classical music? it is possible your seeing something that is not in my poetry and adding things, is it not? and maybe read my poetry a little more slowly? again, warm welcome to ypdc:) nessa |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 10:25:17 AM AEST
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Nessa, you know, all that matters is that you touch people with your writing... a poet like you is hard to come by.... beautiful write...
love always,
~Crystal~ |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by norm on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 07:39:43 PM AEST
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I love your love..
i never had it..
sakes above
sounds a gadget.
sounds so great
I'd never rate it..
with such a mate
I could have made it. |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 04:54:15 PM AEST
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| this isreally nice i like your poems, if I could write them I would ! but I don't so I hope you dont mind I read them here, its a good place to read Nancy |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by princesspurty on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 08:14:36 PM AEST
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| beautiful! |
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Re: when the sun blows up
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by twinkletoes on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 07:21:31 PM AEST
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Yes love is worth dying for, it is worth every little piece of US, a well thought out write nessa.
tt |
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