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1 loss, two more?
Contributed by
poetrygirl1991
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Monday, 14th April 2008 @ 05:29:43 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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i've lost who i am..im not sure of anything,
how could this be, in all reality i should be aching.
i loved you..i love you. it doesnt just end like that.
But how has this happened,
im spiraling in circles, uncontrollably.
its breaking me, destroying me to see how things have ended;
but i can now see that its possible to let go, even when it seems relentless.
what do i mean to you? Don;t you get it.
I'm not quite sure what to do.
Then theres those two people,
their there. there to talk to , there to try to understand.
one of them is really sweet and easy to talk to ,
the other one i know a little better and hes a good guy all and all/
am i moving to fast? what do i do?
i feel so wrong. im not using them to get over him,
im not like that at all
but how could this be , that one day i just woke up and didnt like him anymore.
hows that even possible?!? it makes no sense.
what do they feel towards me, are they using me?
im just soo lost soo confused. and they dont even know.
is it wrong what im doing, i mean im not confessing my feelings it just doesnt make any sense i mean..
im just sooo lost.
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Re: 1 loss, two more?
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by jantra on
Monday, 14th April 2008 @ 11:28:19 PM AEST
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| haha well i'm not going to give you advice on the problem in this poem except to say that you are 17 and there are millions more fish in the sea besides the guy you are trying to get over. from a poetry standpoint you are right this is not really a poem, it's a journal entry. there is a difference. however you could actually have a poem here if you expanded more on the 1 loss two more theme of the title and wrote about that rather then just presenting a series of unanswered questions for yourself. |
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Re: 1 loss, two more?
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 07:48:21 AM AEST
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well im 17 nearly 18 and i get were your coming from but yeh there are other lads out there and yeh it doesnt seem like there is right now and even though your not using the other two to get over 'him' you can lean on them a little for support thats not wrong.
you can sometimes just wake up and feel different about something its just how you feel and feelings change as we do .. or we'd still be playing with our barbie dolls thingking lads were yucky and kissing was not even in our heads... we grow we learn and we get over. the world wont end.. just a relationship. |
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Re: 1 loss, two more?
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 02:31:29 AM AEST
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| I think this falls along the lines of poetry..but thats just me..i would call this a free write poem..or something to that effect..it's all your thoughts and questions and your problem flowing out with words..thats a poem to me...and i get the title..i think you wrote about the title...you lost one person you cared about..now your afraid your gonna lose your 2 friends that are there for you because you wonder if it seems like your using them..i realy enjoy this kind of poetry when it's written well..and this was written very well..and i'm sure there are many people out there that can totaly relate to this very situation..I agree with the last comment too...it is ok to lean on your friends for help and support through tough times..thats why they are friends..thats part of their job description when they let themselves into your life. I don't have any advice on the problem at hand, except for, time...you will get over all this in time...it's one of those problems that will actually heal as the days pass...their aren't many problems that will even though people like to say time heals all..thats not true..but in this particular case i believe it is. good luck..and if you ever just need someone to talk to i'm willing to listen and lend whatever kind of thoughts or advice i possibly have... |
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