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End it all
Contributed by
nirvana12
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Monday, 14th April 2008 @ 12:05:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Youve said your goodbyes, youve corrected your lies, youve hushed your babies cries. Now with no guilt youll end it all.
You climb up the steps, swallowing pills to calm regreats, you cant pay off your hearts debts. This jump will end it all.
You look over the ledge, youve surpassed your minds edge, to this jump youve made a pledge. One more step will end it all.
I like the way the wind blows your hair around, as you smile falling toward the ground.
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2008-04-14 12:05:30]
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Re: End it all
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by a7x36 on
Monday, 14th April 2008 @ 12:37:07 PM AEST
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| interesting and perverse |
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Re: End it all
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by emystar on
Monday, 14th April 2008 @ 04:30:22 PM AEST
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this is very sad but great writing 'cause you convinced me.
I'll pray for you.
I use to thank that way too years ago but thank God my children were enuff to keep me here and God's mercy and grace.
huggs, prayer, peace, joy, hope,
emy |
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Re: End it all
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by jantra on
Monday, 14th April 2008 @ 07:56:34 PM AEST
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| you have an interesting style i would like to hear more from you beyond the more cliched suicidal poetry. i see a lot of potential in you, im sure this one is almost too easy to write. try to stretch more and write beyond this. |
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