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Your Pain
Contributed by
FallenStar
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Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You say that no one loves you..
you think no one cares..
You hid..
You killed.
destruction sits at your feet..
your nothing but a low down dog
Hiding behind your pain..
feeling the rage build up
You didnt notice how many you hurt...
but you...
you didnt see me sitting there crying on the curb...
my face burried in my own pool of tears..
this pain you say you caused to no one..
you dont know who it affects..
but you dont seem to care
the cutting the burning..the tearing the ripping
you didnt know i cared so much
I thought you hated me...
I thought you didnt see me..
you never did see this the way i did
you caused me so much pain..
i begged .. i pleaded
you still went on..
i tried to help
you pushed me away...
You know what i say by these words
i still beg an plead...
dont go on..
i am here to help you
always..forever...
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FallenStar
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2003-03-12 15:40:00]
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Re: Your Pain
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by Damien on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 05:33:25 PM AEST
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| That was a very good write-Damien |
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Re: Your Pain
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 11:08:59 PM AEST
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Well I hope he reads this he needs to know there are people who want to help & let them help!
A true friend indeed! Christina |
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