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Never Say Goodbye
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
on
Sunday, 13th April 2008 @ 11:41:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Tonight, I remember love,
Watching the shadows dance like Christmas,
Your eyes light up,
And no one ever told me.
How beautiful.
That with pain and beauty, anger lies sleeping,
Deep within the very heart of me.
Could you take my pains?
Carry my burdens in place of your own;
And I will take yours.
Your heart beating in the place of mine.
Warmth and passion.
Compassion.
With another sip of wine, my fear escapes,
Watches me from the corner of the room,
Judges me,
Controls me.
Nothing to fear.
But everything to be afraid of.
Tomorrow, maybe without you.
How can I face that?
Without tears, and heartache.
You understand,
Because you’re the first I’ve ever met,
To feel the same.
When we two shall part,
The earth will be dead to me,
Life will be dead to me,
Because you are life,
And truth, hope and love.
So tonight, I remember you, as you stand beside me.
Hopefully,
Not for the last time.
Goodnight, the only man to ever love me.
Never say goodbye.
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Ruby2sdy
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2008-04-13 23:41:01]
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Re: Never Say Goodbye
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by juliestevens18 on
Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 12:50:37 AM AEST
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Because you're the first I've ever met
to feel the same
when we two shall part
the earth will be dead to me
because you are life
and truth hope and love
I can relate to this poem in so many ways.... I really enjoyed reading this poem.. keep up the good work. I am surprised that I am the first one to comment on this poem |
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Re: Never Say Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 01:14:42 AM AEST
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Such devotion...You convey a strong emotion here.
I am a little afraid of the "When" we two shall part. Its too much like a premintion...perhaps "If ever"?
Strong write!! |
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