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life lost

Contributed by xxILoveTheSilencexx on Sunday, 13th April 2008 @ 10:51:52 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

This moon breaks through the clouds. The day is fading along with my hopes for a better tomorrow. I stand above this basin of regret and remorse, taking a razor from my drawer. I cut along my skin, my blood bleeds pitch black against my porceline wrist. My heart is black from the things I have done. I scream in agony as the tears stream down my face. Like acid they burn into my skin, making me wish for another way out. I seem to find these pills out of luck. The light from the moon is fading, I can see my judgment coming, the pits of hell seem to welcome me. But my life is not yet over, something seems to pull me back into my horror show. This contempt for living is not gone. I awake to find myself wishing things were over, planning to wait again for tomorrow night. This life is not lost, it's just begining.

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Re: life lost (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 11:40:31 PM AEST
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This is a great piece of work. It draws you deeper as it goes along, then the twist at the end gets you.

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