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Last September
Contributed by
Bubbles02
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Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 02:09:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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They say it’s not too late,
But she’s already accepted her fate.
There’s still time to stop,
But she’s already felt her heart pop.
“You still have time”
But she no longer wants to climb.
What she wants, no one knows.
She sits alone, watching as her own blood flows.
The words echo in her head, you still have time.
But maybe she’d done here, and she wants you to listen to her rhyme.
It’s really not too late, but she’s given in.
She knows she won’t win.
So let her go,
But do not forget her. You can still love her also.
However, if you truly, truly love her, do not let her do it.
Let her know she’s loved, after all, everything counts, every little bit.
Hold her in your arms as if she’s the last thing in the world.
Make her forget that she ever watched as her blood swirled.
Keep her safe, cherish each moment with her.
And just remember that she could’ve left you last September.
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Bubbles02
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2008-04-12 14:09:05]
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Re: Last September
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by diba_perfect on
Sunday, 13th April 2008 @ 05:19:06 AM AEST
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| oh my God..what an awesum write..specially the ending.. |
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Re: Last September
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by marie on
Sunday, 13th April 2008 @ 08:18:25 AM AEST
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| made me cry. its so sad and beautiful. wow. |
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Re: Last September
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 13th April 2008 @ 08:59:46 AM AEST
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A poignant and thought provoking write.
Glad to have been given the chance to read it
Steve |
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Re: Last September
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by xxILoveTheSilencexx on
Sunday, 13th April 2008 @ 12:01:28 PM AEST
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oh my god.....if only all girls and guys knew they were loved...alot more would be alive....
my bf keeps talking about killing himself.....and it scares me....=( |
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Re: Last September
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 11:46:05 PM AEST
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Amazing....
I must say.... I HAVE had those thoughts myself.... but somehow this stops me:
I made a promise not to do it... a promise TO the person who caused the pain....
but as i said... amazing... and keep em coming |
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