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~Faced With A Mountain~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 11:30:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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She was thrust upon a mountain
It was expected she would climb
She didn’t think she was well-equipped,
To ascend at that given time.
Although she had the best of experiences
And the view from the top was grand,
She didn’t think she could handle the pressure,
This wasn’t what she had planned.
She tried her best to go forward,
Meticulously following each trail.
Her greatest fear arose once more-
She didn’t want to fail.
She discovered hidden strengths in herself
But her weaknesses resurfaced again.
Faced once more with a reality so cold,
How could she, her confidence retain!
She didn’t think she was ready to quit
Yet with each step she pondered.
Would she be able to weather the storm
As upon this hill she wandered?
She was faced with a mountain,
She didn't think she could climb.
She didn’t think she was ready
She was still battling against time.
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Jenni_K
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2008-04-12 11:30:55]
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Re: ~Faced With A Mountain~
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by Keila on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 12:09:43 PM AEST
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| i loved it! i can relate |
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Re: ~Faced With A Mountain~
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by shelby on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 01:50:18 PM AEST
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I relate to this so much Jen....... I know you won the battle.
Michelle |
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Re: ~Faced With A Mountain~
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 04:42:34 PM AEST
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And u did it.
Ssshhhh, I want tell.
Awesome jen.
big huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: ~Faced With A Mountain~
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 09:30:53 PM AEST
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| awsome write..it leaves the reader not wanting to wait till tomorrow for the rest..I can deffiantly relate to this...nicely done. |
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Re: ~Faced With A Mountain~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 11:44:04 PM AEST
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Apparently she knew herself better than most
and yet she posess the strenght to prevail. . a
most powerful constituion she carrie's around with her, call'ed, inner strenght . . .
a great write jenn as always your coming through most remarkably . . .
Ben
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Re: ~Faced With A Mountain~
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by countrygirl327 on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2008 @ 10:16:12 AM AEST
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| I just started reading a couple of your poems. I really like this one a lot! It speaks to me. So far it is my favorite. |
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Re: ~Faced With A Mountain~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 11:15:45 AM AEST
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| another poem that flows perfectly, it is like a song. you have remarkable skill and ability. the imagery in this is very good as well. all in all, sensational. |
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