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Tempest Wake
Contributed by
LoveStruck_Hippie
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Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 05:55:20 AM in AEST
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Re: Tempest Wake
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by ZiggyB on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 06:42:01 AM AEST
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| Excellant write - I really like the title. As I read this, I could see images of someone trying to retrieve segments of their lives. Great job at expressing the image. |
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Re: Tempest Wake
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 11:33:08 AM AEST
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If this is rough i can live with it. i found it to be
very beautiful, and good, you, are what you are all about. the picture the words the feelings, tell your story in there own way.
lovely writting Shannon . . .
Thank you also for your read and comment.
a nice evening to you my friend, and a better day 2morrow . . .
Ben
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Re: Tempest Wake
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 07:03:58 AM AEST
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| I was pulled in by the title...and held here by your wonderful imagery.....Nicely worded... Jenni |
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Re: Tempest Wake
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th June 2008 @ 01:13:44 AM AEST
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Very well put together!!!!
The images are quite vivid! |
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