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Covered in White
Contributed by
alibof10
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Friday, 11th April 2008 @ 01:39:59 PM in AEST
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Two layers of white
Are my only cover
Walking in the night
Feeling cold from the weather
Having some sort of fight
From a death that might strike
But my heart’s one of a knight
Thanks to my beloved ones out of sight
Thinking about me and praying for my return
Safe and sound without even a sun burn
Your love to me keeps me safe
Makes any harm run away from me in disgrace
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2008-04-11 13:39:59]
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Re: Covered in White
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by SilverRain on
Friday, 11th April 2008 @ 06:37:20 PM AEST
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| alibof10 really a stunning piece. Dont we wish that we can sometimes really do that and cover the people we love to keep them out of harms way! A beautiful way to express this. Well done. |
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Re: Covered in White
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by Amorita on
Friday, 11th April 2008 @ 09:40:56 PM AEST
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This is a really cute poem... I loved it :)
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