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Completion

Contributed by Beni on Friday, 11th April 2008 @ 02:42:59 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Its like a dream I thought would never come true.
And a happiness I never imagined I’d feel.
Whatever we go through I know we’ll pull through.
No matter how high the mountain may seem
We’ll reach the top

Through all the frustration and bitter depression,
You’ll always be true to me,
Rescuing me as I fall into darkness.
You’re the only one that can save me,
You can save me from myself.

Life has been full of oppression.
Isolated and trapped within my own thoughts.
Bottled up emotions causing such grief.
You’ve set me free from my cage
You’ve given me reason to live.

I find myself without you at night,
Discontent, alone and suffering,
And I’m secretly falling apart.
Knowing that you’re not here,
Knowing that you’re not in my arms.

I need you here,
I need you in my life.

Falling asleep with you makes my dreams come alive,
And waking up next to you makes my heart skip a beat.
You’ve killed the loneliness inside of me,
You see through my scars, these imperfections.
Please won’t you love me ?
Then let us die romantic.
Completed.

<3

Copyright Â© Beni ... [ 2008-04-11 02:42:59]
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Re: Completion (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 03:02:20 AM AEST
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i just love this poem, just because it is so true. i mean, you have a nice poem, and never stop writing.

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