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False Hope
Contributed by
artjunkiekyle
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Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 12:57:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The moon whispered divinities of chance and hope.
The stars that hung so low bowed their heads.
The oceans reached and grasped for the crimson- stained clouds.
the rain drops tried so hard to spill back into their homes.
The moon whispered false divinities of chance and hope--
broke the wicker basket and it all came crashing down--
The universe's attempts to regain stature faltered and wilted...
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2008-04-10 12:57:28]
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Re: False Hope
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by Ruby2sdy on
Friday, 11th April 2008 @ 02:07:49 AM AEST
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Such beautifully vivid imagery, yet I can see the desolation there, very well conveyed kyle, thank you
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Re: False Hope
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by Silvano on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 02:32:04 AM AEST
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| I've just read about 20 poems on here, and this is the first one I've liked. So that's pretty good. |
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