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Kingdom of Satisfaction
Contributed by
artjunkiekyle
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Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 12:50:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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i can only take so much blame for your mistakes.
late at night, your words sting like the hornets venom.
your tongue becomes a whip.
your words my chains.
i become your whipping boy.
you dig at me like the continuous disheveling of the gravekeeper.
all the time, your breath reeking of weed.
i've grown weary of this.
i ran away today.
tried to find bliss.
and you never even noticed.
i suppose you were too busy getting high.
taking yourself to that kingdom.
that kingdom of satisfaction.
where your child didn't matter.
look at yourself.
peer into the illusive pensieve.
the color has disappeared from your eyes.
your weight has dropped, yet the smoke still rises.
your rage grows with the beast inside you.
you arent even you anymore.
and you don't even have an inkling of my knowledge- 'cause your in your kingdom of satisfaction- mommy
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Re: Kingdom of Satisfaction
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 01:41:31 PM AEST
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This is so sad...but so well written. I hope this is fictional...if not, I hope things get better for you...
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Re: Kingdom of Satisfaction
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by ZiggyB on
Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 01:54:01 PM AEST
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| This is sad. It expresses so much pain. Nice write. |
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Re: Kingdom of Satisfaction
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by purplestary on
Friday, 11th April 2008 @ 02:55:03 AM AEST
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| it deffinantly conncects with the reader..i can feel the pain and the anguish in this... very well written...there are so many people who go through this very situation....i feel for them and pray for them..i really hope things get better for you or whoever this may be talking about... |
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Re: Kingdom of Satisfaction
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by blissful-ignorance on
Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 12:45:25 PM AEST
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im sorry to say that i know exactly what youre talking about...
hopefully it will get better :) |
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