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Again
Contributed by
Jen_unknown_to_myself
on
Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 07:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I want
I need
to feel the cold edge on
my wrist
I want
I need
To feel the
Warmth of my blood
Gently fall down
My fingertips
I want
I need
To feel the addictive
Pain once again
I want
I need
A release from this
HATE
Copyright ©
Jen_unknown_to_myself
... [
2008-04-10 07:40:00]
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Re: Again
(User Rating: 1 )
by artjunkiekyle on
Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 10:33:58 AM AEST
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many people who cut themselves seek for an escape
something many people dont understand
and in this short poem you seem to have captured the essence and purpose many people have for cutting
marvelous
captured perfectly in disdainfully beautiful words
thankyou for posting
amazing
~kyle |
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Re: Again
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 03:26:45 PM AEST
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this was a brilliant write on how some must feel when they cut.. beautifully written and expressed here
rock on,
vampyress jenni |
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