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I will not be - the prophecy
Contributed by
an3n
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Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 05:43:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I am scattered between two loves
i am scattered between no love
i am scattered in the nothingness
that a love passing by has left
I am going nowhere
i am walking through the debris
of broken dreams and promises
and broken ideals
and i am wondering
if all these pieces will ever unite
to form a whole of me again
You are scattered between a thousand worlds
When you go there, you'll keep a part of me with you
like the million you s that i met
but when you will return
i will not be
You will take your bags and your books
your dreams and my heart in a plane
You'll be counting seven seconds and seven nights
untill the moon will come to stab your soul in death
and bleeding you will return
but i will not be
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2008-04-10 05:43:27]
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Re: I will not be - the prophecy
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by artjunkiekyle on
Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 10:37:06 AM AEST
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angst portrayed
powerful ending
perhaps (though im not quite sure) this is a way of moving on for you
i think you've succeeded in making a splendid poem
thanks for posting
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Re: I will not be - the prophecy
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by an3n on
Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 03:10:42 AM AEST
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