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Take me away
Contributed by
SilverRain
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Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 04:51:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Take me away from all that is real
in a world only you and I share
Where we池e able to love and live and be
anything we want to be
And we can run around naked
and spend all our time
just being where we most want to be
together in this fantasy world
created for just you and me
And we値l laugh and we値l play
and we値l run around all day
and we値l dance to our favourite song
and we値l talk and we値l share
our most intimate things
in each others arms where we belong.
As the sun set on the most beautiful day
we値l make love till the moon set on high
I never want to go back to all that is real
Take me away
Please take me away.
Copyright ﾂｩ
SilverRain
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2008-04-08 16:51:34]
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Re: Take me away
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by ZiggyB on
Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 08:29:37 PM AEST
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SilverRain - Again an amazing piece. Where do you come up with so much heartfelt stuff. This poem represents the sentiments of so many people in such an endearing and touching way. I myself can remember a special someone saying nearly these exact words to me. You brought me right to that moment again. Made me feel...like it was yesterday. Thankyou.
I'll rate this a 5.
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Re: Take me away
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by vampyrekiss on
Wednesday, 9th April 2008 @ 01:00:54 AM AEST
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im speechless that was great :)
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Re: Take me away
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 9th April 2008 @ 06:13:36 AM AEST
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WOW...I wish I had written this.... It's great.... just how I feel at times....
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