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i killed myself
Contributed by
BRIDGI
on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 11:46:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I'm sitting in this room,
It's dark and Im alone,
I dont know how I got here,
but I see a lot of blood,
There's a knife beside me,
And a body to my left,
I'm weak and shaking but I turn her over,
I'm shocked to see,
This poor girl is me,
She's dressed in black,
And there are cuts on her arm,
Why has she caused herself so much bodily harm?
There's a letter in her hand,
It simply says 'good-bye',
I realized that it was a letter of suicide,
She was sad and lonely,
She couldnt stand to live,
So she decided to slit her wrist,
But why is this knife in my hand?
Did I force her to take this step?
The step that caused her to end her life,
All because I wanted to live,
Why couldn't I just dwell within?
Within the sad and depressed part of me?
Why did I want to be set free?
Now I'm forced to live in this world alone,
And call this hell hole a home,
I don't think I can handle it on my own,
But I killed the only friend I had,
I'll live in each day,
Regretting what I've done,
Maybe I was meant to live,
And make my life rite,
But only time can tell,
And I dont have much of that,
Living in this hell.
Copyright ©
BRIDGI
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2008-04-07 23:46:02]
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Re: i killed myself
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 02:56:05 AM AEST
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I like your writing. A few spelling errors, but a great write just the same. I think dark poetry sometimes releases just enough energy to get things on the right path again.
Deadwriter
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Re: i killed myself
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 05:38:51 AM AEST
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| I agree with the previous person. This is an excellent write. It expresses everything you're feeling. I enjoyed reading it, keep up on the good work =) |
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Re: i killed myself
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by vampyrekiss on
Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 08:40:18 AM AEST
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great write i liked the perspative of it keep it up and hopefully this will pass and if its just a write great job
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Re: i killed myself
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by xxILoveTheSilencexx on
Sunday, 13th April 2008 @ 12:05:14 PM AEST
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| amazing....i tried to write smething sorta like this....but it wasnt as good as yours....=) |
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Re: i killed myself
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by alibof10 on
Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 10:54:41 PM AEST
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| amazingly written and expresses a huge amount of emotions and feelings ... an awesome poem .. no1 could've written the same idea better ... i love it :) |
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