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You should know
Contributed by
SilverRain
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Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 05:15:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The things I want to say to you
get lost before they come
I just can not explain to you
in everything I say or do
but hope the action speak the words I cant
I want to always be with you
every second,
every moment,
every day
I want to share my all with you
every smile,
every tear,
every breath
As the words get lost on paper
and miss your desperately needing heart
know that I will always love you
this is just the start…
Copyright ©
SilverRain
... [
2008-04-07 17:15:33]
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Re: You should know
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by ZiggyB on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 10:02:45 PM AEST
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I don't have any idea just how many years of experience you have at writing poerty, but you have me at the point where I'm looking forward to your postings. You have such extraordinary writing skills. I may sometime in the future, try taking the essence of some of your work, and attempt to put my own spin on it. Of course, it would not in any way mimmick your work, but I feel that some of your writings will inspire me to try a different style. Again, this poem is a FIVE-STAR . Thanks for sharing with the world.
~Stephan~
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Re: You should know
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 02:43:44 PM AEST
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very pretty...
hugs n' love nessa |
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