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My love, I am through with you
Contributed by
artjunkiekyle
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Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 01:12:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Was it that my hair smelled of lilac instead of sultry roses?
Or that my eyes only went as deep as the streambed instead of the sparkling blue- green ocean?
Were my addictions too much for you to cope with?
I felt so abandoned by you as I lingered in the twilight of the afterparty, helping you to adjust to the lights of a sunken reality.
I shouldered your dismal fate, made it fluorish and thrive.
But the only shoulder I received from you was the frigid glacier of misunderstanding.
You left me alone in the hotel room, scared and isolated from my senses.
Maybe my demons overshadowed your beautiful face, but you were never disregarded and left for scraps as I was.
Was I the appetizer before the main course?
Did the brown of my eyes lead you into deception?
Or was it you, who so boldly led me into disdain?
My love, I am through with you.
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Re: My love, I am through with you
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by Ruby2sdy on
Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 10:05:17 AM AEST
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oh god, this opened a few of my old battle scars! so raw, and so very beautiful... thank you for hurting me a little bit, I must have needed it :)
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Re: My love, I am through with you
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by owkenny on
Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 03:01:44 PM AEST
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| i love the wordplay in the first three lines. |
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