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Me And You
Contributed by
alibof10
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Sunday, 6th April 2008 @ 11:46:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A place where people come to pray
I go there, and try to fade away
Thinking about my baby is all I do
Oh, baby, I swear I love you
No matter what happens to me and you
Our love will always be true
Nothing will ever come through
Or make a wall that we can't break through
Baby it’s me and you
Together, anything is easy to do!
Copyright ©
alibof10
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2008-04-06 11:46:27]
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Re: Me And You
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by SilverRain on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 03:31:29 AM AEST
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really like the start of your poem....lots of possibilities in the first two lines, but then you surprise us by taking it into another direction.
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Re: Me And You
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by BRIDGI on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 11:48:18 PM AEST
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I like it it shows that you really believed in y'alla love...i like it...
BRidgette |
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