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My Life Is Full
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
on
Sunday, 6th April 2008 @ 11:42:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My life is full of loose ends and old lovers,
Friends of friends, sisters, mothers,
Car insurance and income tax,
Problems with the photocopier, answer phone and fax.
Too much food and too much drink,
And not enough time to think,
The heater’s broken, the gas is gone,
And as for money, well, there’s none.
I’m unemployed and can’t find work,
And half my family have gone berserk,
I left my fella because he said I’m fat,
So now it’s just me and the cat.
I’ve sprained my ankle, I’m epileptic,
And the cut on my finger is going septic,
I’m a chain smoker with a chest infection,
And can’t decide whether to vote, in the election,
I’ve got a headache, I’m feeling sick,
No qualifications; not dyslexic, but thick.
I’ve aching hips and clicking knees,
And I’m coming down with some disease,
Of all these things, there’s one thing true, you see:
I am glad this is fiction, just poetry.
Copyright ©
Ruby2sdy
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2008-04-06 11:42:08]
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Re: My Life Is Full
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by ZiggyB on
Sunday, 6th April 2008 @ 12:25:15 PM AEST
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| Pretty good play with words. Thank God this is fiction. Keep writing and have fun. |
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Re: My Life Is Full
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by whome on
Sunday, 6th April 2008 @ 11:34:26 PM AEST
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| I loved how you used your words, gradually becoming more and more serious. Till that final line!!!! I loved it |
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Re: My Life Is Full
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 09:25:50 AM AEST
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Pure entertainment......maybe a comedy script beckons, you certainly made me laugh when I came to that final line.
You live in a great part of the world..........how do I know?..........I live there too
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