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The Dancer
Contributed by
eeeitak
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Sunday, 6th April 2008 @ 05:49:05 AM in AEST
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I light the candle and watch it glow
See the fire flicker round
With wind the flame puts on a show
I light the candle and watch it glow
It pirouettes and leaps to-and-fro
Moving relentlessly, but making no sound
I light the candle and watch it glow
See the fire flicker round
Copyright ©
eeeitak
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2008-04-06 05:49:05]
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Re: The Dancer
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th April 2008 @ 03:55:08 AM AEST
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My kind of poetry, this is beautiful in it's
simplicity along with it's artistry, a nice
feeling of yesteryear i got reading it, along
with the tittle of it, thank you for the vivd
vision . . .
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Re: The Dancer
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 02:03:15 PM AEST
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A brilliant write... The imagery is just wonderful....
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Re: The Dancer
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 12:06:51 AM AEST
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A lovely piece, it flickers
like a candle flame and
is just as warm, splendid
presentation and artistry.
Ben |
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