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Mirrors
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 10:51:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Mirrors
Mirror, mirror on the wall
Why from grace did I fall?
Why did no one save me?
Was this just my destiny?
Mirror, mirror into which I look
How do I repent for the life I took?
How can I prove it was not planned?
Into the water, not the rocks, he was to land
Mirror, mirror through which I stare
Why do the authorities think I do not care?
Could it be the cold look upon my face?
As they rush to judge me, like they are in a race
Mirror, mirror with that is now clear
I’m searching hard, but see no one here
Does this mean I am doomed to death?
Have I already taken my last breath?
Mirror, mirror on the wall
Will anyone looking recall?
The good man I used to be?
The caring for people inside of me
Mirror, mirror that has fallen to the floor
My name is not even whispered anymore
A ghost that has passed from this place
I have vanished without a trace
Deadwriter
04/03/2008
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Re: Mirrors
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 11:15:03 AM AEST
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Interesting concept. When we look into the mirror, we rarely see
the same person each time, methinks. But you have taken that to
a whole different level. Quite imaginative, my friend. There is a
destiny of despair within these words that grips with cold fingers. Great
job.
~Breezy
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Re: Mirrors
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by MajesticPoet on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 11:24:20 AM AEST
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Interesting write.. I like how it moved, the images and more. Very nice work.. Keep them coming.
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Re: Mirrors
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 11:35:12 AM AEST
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Look deeper into that mirror, my friend..and you will see the REAL YOU!!
The caring, courageous, trustworthy, thoughtful and talented person you are.... Shall I go on??
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Mirrors
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by shelby on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 12:12:34 PM AEST
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Such profound emotion in this. I dont think you have vanished cause I can see you.......*wink* Loved this write
Michelle |
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Re: Mirrors
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by hostile_waffle on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 05:14:46 PM AEST
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'I have vanished without a trace'
I like the last part.
Very creative, very nice! |
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