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The day i felt saved
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
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Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 12:25:40 AM in AEST
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i have felt something
something so new to me
this feeling has never happen to me before
when i was bitten by a dog
i have never felt so hurt or in pain
i felt like the dog was saint
yet only in dog's form
so i was bitten
for the very first time
i felt like he was pulling me in
to join him in his relam
so, once i was all cleared up
with some medicine and by blessings
i felt like god punched the devil in the face
and took me back to the promise land
and at first
i though i was going to died from the bite
but thanks to god and his helpers
i have been blessed
and my finger is getting better
if i could
i would kiss god, and tell him
"THANK YOU, ALMIGHT!"
you have saved the day again from saint's ways
xoxoxo, i love you, god!
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PreciousKitten
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Re: The day i felt saved
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 09:11:30 AM AEST (User
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The line from this that I will remember for a long time is
"I felt like god punched the devil in the face".
For me, that was such a good line to put in a poem.
Thanks
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