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why?
Contributed by
weeme
on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 11:25:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i sit here and wonder
why is it me
my lifes in shambles
again only me
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i build up my hopes
for them only to be dashed
my lifes like a huge
most certaintly car crash
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as time goes on
further and further i stray
no one to guide me
on my way
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family devided
relationships torn
why is it,
that i am born
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no matter whats done
no matter whats said
surly would it be better
if i was just dead
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then i think of lifes blessings
that i did without
and wounder if i could
teach the world throught
Copyright ©
weeme
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2008-04-02 23:25:20]
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Re: why?
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by Xmorbid6childrnx on
Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 02:31:29 AM AEST
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It seems jumbled, and the spelling doesn't seem to help the piece in this case, only hurt it. I do like the image that it puts across but its alot to piece together...
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Re: why?
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by ZiggyB on
Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 10:39:20 PM AEST
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| Not bad, just need to check spelling. |
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