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Kite
Contributed by
eeeitak
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Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 07:55:47 AM in AEST
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I am a kite
You are a child
You hold on too long
Then toss me to the wind
I flutter up and prance
In all directions, being torn
From all my sides
I cannot leave you without your approval
Please, just let me go
I am your kite
Attached by a mere string
I try to fly away from you
I cannot
Please, just let go of me
Just release me
How long must I be your kite?
We’ve put as much distance as
My ties will allow
Between us but it is not
Enough for me and it is not
Enough for you
I was not made for you
Still, I cannot leave without your approval
I cannot
Please, just let me go
Release me
I am not your kite
Copyright ©
eeeitak
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2008-04-02 07:55:47]
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Re: Kite
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 09:27:16 AM AEST
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This is sad yet overwelmingly beautiful, and
i could see it at a glance whie reading, and it brought back memories as a child, i love this line > " In all directions, being torn From all my sides " truly stunning write . . .
Ben
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Re: Kite
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by LauraMary on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 01:04:29 PM AEST
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| One of my absolute favorites. |
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Re: Kite
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 04:32:51 AM AEST
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nice job,
such a perfect metaphor... sometimes people hold onto their "kites" too long,
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