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Forever
Contributed by
honey56
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Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 03:08:03 AM in AEST
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The love of my life has long
Pass on
But, yet I write of love
And how I felt love was meant
To be
Turning my life upside down
Loving me without knowing
How
Yet giving me your all
As well as I
Making a lifetime filled with
Love
Making memories that will not be
Forgotten and washed away by
Time
A love that will last forever with
Copyright ©
honey56
... [
2008-04-02 03:08:03]
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Re: Forever
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 10:40:22 AM AEST
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They say it only takes a spark to get a fire going. Love's wonderful feeling can be set ablaze the same way. When you share that feeling with someone for a while it can withstand all absences. Even the passing of the loved one. Such a beautiful piece of writing you have here. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Deadwriter
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Re: Forever
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by ZiggyB on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 09:25:40 PM AEST
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| Nice!!! Very good writing. |
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Re: Forever
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by whome on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 01:55:38 PM AEST
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| Thank you for such a beautiful poem. It is so simple yet filled with emotion. |
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Re: Forever
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 07:38:41 PM AEST
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A beautiful statement of forever-love. I felt such genuiness and truth in your reaffirmation.
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