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~~Winds of Chance~~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 09:20:02 AM in AEST
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Blown back to life by the winds of chance
Sent here again, other lives to enhance.
Captain once more of your own ship,
Finally, on life, you have a firm grip.
Advice given in times gone by,
Never was in short supply.
Crashing like waves onto the shore
When needed, there was always more.
Once lost in the sea of existence,
You went away to keep your distance.
Now, like a true sailor you have returned to your boat
Your sole purpose, to help others stay afloat.
This time you need to stay on course
No more will you have any remorse.
Give others the benefit of your guidance
Thank God for the winds of chance!
31.03.08
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Jenni_K
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2008-04-01 09:20:02]
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Re: ~~Winds of Chance~~
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 09:37:29 AM AEST
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Jen this is a touching and lovely write. I would love to hear the story behind the inspiration.
Michelle |
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Re: ~~Winds of Chance~~
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by eeeitak on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 10:39:07 AM AEST
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I love how the first and last lines have "winds of chance" in them.
you're very talented :] |
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Re: ~~Winds of Chance~~
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 02:37:46 PM AEST
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Girlfriend,
the break served you well.
I'd put this up against all your other writes, altho all your writing is great.
I've written you one and I wrote it before I even got online so this is the first time I've read this masterpeice of heart, soul and all that is good.
Luv ya sis,
emy |
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Re: ~~Winds of Chance~~
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 09:38:26 PM AEST
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Every true sailor knows what signs to follow. He watches the stars placed in the heavens above and the dolphins in the ocean below. All guided by God in his infinite wisdom. Maybe this sailor received more from all of you than each of you knew. Such a great write Jenni.
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Re: ~~Winds of Chance~~
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 10:53:49 PM AEST
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Dear Jenni, what a come back work of art. So beautifully written indeed. I hope this sailor stays on course to guide us all to the shore.
Welcome back my good friend, You are truly one of the very few precious gems of YPDC.
God bless you.
FRANCO.
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Re: ~~Winds of Chance~~
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 01:46:24 AM AEST
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very beautiful...
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: ~~Winds of Chance~~
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by whome on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 05:22:20 PM AEST
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Beautifully written.
I thoughly enjoyed reading it.
The past is now behind you
whallowing in the troughs of waves
Your future is where the wind dost drive you
So let your boat before the wind do dance
For dull is the life that never takes a chance. |
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Re: ~~Winds of Chance~~
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by jesusofholland on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 01:25:44 PM AEST
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| This is so kind and gentle! Whoever this was for must have had trouble holding the tears back when they read it. Great piece of work! |
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Re: ~~Winds of Chance~~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 11:00:59 AM AEST
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| it flows superbly and the rhyming scheme is brilliant. well done! |
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Re: ~~Winds of Chance~~
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 7th February 2010 @ 07:51:26 PM AEST
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Jenni,
This is a wonderfully penned piece of poetry. WOW!!!! Well done. :o) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us.
*S* Cynthia
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Missed ya! |
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