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Does it Matter...?
Contributed by
Bubbles02
on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 07:26:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I pretend I don't see you.
Oh god, how i wish that were true.
All I want is for her to go away.
But honestly, does it matter what I say?
Does it matter that my heart is breaking?
I act okay, but I'm just faking.
Does it matter that every night I cry myself to sleep?
They tell me to stop, but I'm in so deep.
Does it matter that I cut?
It's all because of her, that slut.
I'm sure you don't care, or maybe you just don't know.
But how can you be so low?!
You must hate me to do this,
make me long for His kiss.
I'd never thought it'd come to this...
Copyright ©
Bubbles02
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2008-04-01 07:26:52]
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Re: Does it Matter...?
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by Stonedraider23 on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 01:20:54 PM AEST
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| i was lost for a min. but it matters dont cut because of him shes not the only slut..... Good write tho |
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Re: Does it Matter...?
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by Stonedraider23 on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 01:23:35 PM AEST
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| that comment i left was dumb its not just her fault ummm yea he's a slut too ummm yea im confusing and a lil lost |
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Re: Does it Matter...?
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by ZiggyB on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 08:52:29 PM AEST
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| It takes two to tango. It would not be fair to you, to want someone that does not want you. Take what you have, to someone that would have and return your sentiments. Life will go on. Good writing. |
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Re: Does it Matter...?
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by Cosby on
Wednesday, 7th December 2011 @ 03:47:58 PM AEST
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| I feel the pain. Good one, Maybe it could use some touch up but the heart is there. |
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