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A week
Contributed by
zooyork_chick
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Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 06:52:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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yet another day after that night before,
it was three days in a row,
my mind slips out from this world,
my body restless,
i am home and laying on my bed,
morning arrives and i am alone,
i pull out the rouge bottle,
i empty out the packet,
one glass of wine,
one large white line,
three days slip into four,
there is a knock at the door,
thats my soul,
saying goodbye
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2008-04-01 06:52:49]
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Re: A week
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 11:19:18 AM AEST
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Very strong piece. I like the legnth of it shows how quickly one's whole life can be given away. I enjoyed it.
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Re: A week
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by a7x36 on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 05:59:52 PM AEST
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| drugs gone overboard..... this shows the helplessness you get when you've taken it too far |
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Re: A week
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by ZiggyB on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 09:09:53 PM AEST
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| Help starts with yourself. This bump in the road can be overcame. I really did enjoy the writing. |
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