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Like Crazy.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 01:54:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I run on raw emotion
Twisted love
And pure devotion
My minds chaotic
Which leads you to believe
That I'm slighty psychotic
But I'm not crazy
My minds just a little bit hazy
From this constant sadness
Sheer utter madness
Really takes it's toll
And I'm already a tortured soul
People just handle things in different ways
And you might not like what my heart displays
But you won't let me see those brighter days
And I guess in a sense
I'm just a little intense
But that's how I operate
How I create...
A way to survive
And yes sometimes
I bleed just to know that I'm alive
Maybe you can understand that
Maybe you don't
Maybe you could try
But I know that you won't
Because all in all
Your just another brick in the wall
Another sheep amongst the herds
With your callous heart
And empty words
So quick to always tear me apart
Burn my dreams and break my heart
I was so naive to believe that you would never decieve
That I gave you my trust and wore my heart on my sleeve
And you took full advantage and swallowed me whole
Lied to my face while you murdered my soul
And I'm supposed to just be okay?
Well sorry but it doesn't work that way
I do what I need to in order to make the pain subdue
And you have the nerve to call me crazy
When all this hurt was caused by you
I'm just struggling to make it through
So if I seem a little bit insane
It's because you broke my heart
And I'm just trying to overcome the pain.
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bleedthelove
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2008-04-01 01:54:45]
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Re: Like Crazy.
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by althea_kendry on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 02:35:32 AM AEST
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| wow! i reli reli like this poem :) great job !!! |
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Re: Like Crazy.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 03:01:04 AM AEST
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This is such an honest and emotional write. It seems that you know yourself well and you've been able to channel your emotions into your writing. Great job and thank you for sharing.
~Jess |
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Re: Like Crazy.
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by BornReckless on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 04:02:42 AM AEST
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| I must agree with Jess, there is sooo much honesty in this poem and it's amazing how you pour your emotions onto paper and have it come out so beautifully. Really good job bleedthelove. |
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Re: Like Crazy.
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by Honey56 on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 11:42:33 AM AEST
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| Excellent write~~~God Bless |
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Re: Like Crazy.
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by ZiggyB on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 09:14:58 PM AEST
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| Outstanding and fantastic. Very indepth with a nice transition to the ending. Excellant writing in my opinion. |
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