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My Purpose
Contributed by
purplestary
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Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 08:06:00 AM in AEST
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What is it that I am missing?
Why is everything fuzzy?
I'm still on the outside
I can't seem to break in.
Or maybe I am locked in,
and i just can't get out.
I don't know what to do.
I want so much more,
but i don't know what i want.
I can't sort through all of these thoughts.
I don't know who i am
I don't know why i am here
I'm stuck inside, battling fear,
screaming for answers
and searching for...
My Purpose...
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Re: My Purpose
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by fielding88 on
Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 09:12:22 AM AEST
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| Interesting read, your 'spew' of thoughts bring up some nice points to ponder. Nice posting |
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Re: My Purpose
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by MajesticPoet on
Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 09:56:49 AM AEST
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Very nice words. The thing is we never find our purpose, our purpose finds us. If we search for it we end up lost inside a world of tinted mirrors looking into darkened walls. Let your purpose find you.. I loved the write. Keep up the good work.
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Re: My Purpose
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by a7x36 on
Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 04:57:31 PM AEST
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this illustrates how you can be humble while talking about yourself constantly.
good luck and don't stop writing, it helps the process |
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Re: My Purpose
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by eeeitak on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2008 @ 06:39:01 AM AEST
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| I can relate to much that you've said here. Really really great write! :] |
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Re: My Purpose
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by whome on
Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 12:14:13 PM AEST
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| I think the reason for our existance is to be forever looking for our purpose in life. There are no answers, only the contentment of accepting your Fate. |
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Re: My Purpose
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 09:53:56 PM AEST
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I have asked those very same questions and faced those same emotions many times before.... and some time ago, it came to me... I wrote a poem about it and maybe I'll post it soon. Enjoyed this very much...
Jenni |
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Re: My Purpose
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by Spike on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 08:23:58 PM AEST
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you and me, both. Nice capture of the process, feeling and frustration in trying to identify some personal destiny.
Spike |
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Re: My Purpose
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by J-A-X on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 03:17:45 AM AEST
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I find myself feeling like that, searching for my purpose as well.
short and sweet. |
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Re: My Purpose
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 12:33:53 AM AEST
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A great piece of writing here. Every time I think I have found my purpose, it changes and I am on the search again.
Deadwriter
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Re: My Purpose
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 09:48:38 PM AEST
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The search for purpose can quite literally drive us mad!
A wonderful myriad of musing, P. Writing down thoughts,
placing them in a row, and musing over them can be quite
therapeutic. I have felt this on numerous occasions .. almost
to the point of suffocation. Maybe there is no way to know
of purpose until the end ... then again .... ^_^
Great post!!
~Breezy
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Re: My Purpose
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by Oceandreamer on
Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 09:55:55 PM AEST
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This poems holds so much truth,
and something for everyone...
It leaves much for the imagination,
and forces one to face those thoughts that
cross most peoples live at least once in
a lifetime...
This poem makes one think...
It grips, and doesn't let go.
I like it!
~~Oceandreamer~~ |
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Re: My Purpose
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 01:57:27 AM AEST
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i believe every stage of life brings a new purpose, maybe you arent missing anything, maybe its waiting to be discovered...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: My Purpose
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by ShaonKra on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 02:49:43 PM AEST
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| It reminds me of the freedom of spirit |
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Re: My Purpose
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 03:03:38 AM AEST
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I love poetry that asks questions and this is no exception. It makes one think and ponder. Nice job.
Take care and thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim |
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Re: My Purpose
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by Invierno on
Friday, 21st December 2018 @ 08:41:10 PM AEST
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Man, I really like this! I have delved into the same thought processes. I like the beginning...are we outside or inside ourselves? Maybe the soul is a floating, invisible ball of energy consciousness that is /'/tethered/'/ so to speak, to our physical bodies? That would explain this separateness that we feel.
At any rate, I really like what you wrote here. I hope you write and post some more. I enjoy reading your stuff. Thanks for commenting on one of mine.
Invierno |
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Re: My Purpose
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by Invierno on
Friday, 21st December 2018 @ 08:41:13 PM AEST
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Man, I really like this! I have delved into the same thought processes. I like the beginning...are we outside or inside ourselves? Maybe the soul is a floating, invisible ball of energy consciousness that is /'/tethered/'/ so to speak, to our physical bodies? That would explain this separateness that we feel.
At any rate, I really like what you wrote here. I hope you write and post some more. I enjoy reading your stuff. Thanks for commenting on one of mine.
Invierno |
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