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Walking In The Rain
Contributed by
honey56
on
Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 07:12:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I'm walking in the rain
Singing the blues
Head hung low
Cause my baby left me
Alone and blue
Weary and tried
Walking in the rain
Singing the blues
Head hung low
Candle light burning
In my window
I hear peoples singing a
Happy tune
While am walking in the rain
Singing the blues
Ain't it funny how I think of
Johnnie Taylor
Singing I believe in you
Sounding so real
As I start to dance the blues
Just hangs in the balance
As a big smile covers my face
I feel so happy as I sing the blues
Walking in the rain with my head
Hung low
Listening to Johnnie Taylor singing
I believe In You
Cause my baby left me alone and
Blue
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honey56
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2008-03-31 07:12:46]
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Re: Walking In The Rain
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by Poetic_Punk on
Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 11:54:31 AM AEST
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| Interesting poem, seems to convey to conflicting feelings at once, good write |
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Re: Walking In The Rain
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by liamleash on
Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 11:53:12 PM AEST
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good poem it's like cheerfull sorrow
good read
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Re: Walking In The Rain
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by eeeitak on
Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 10:54:41 AM AEST
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| this is great- the repitition, the rhyme, everything! wonderful write |
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Re: Walking In The Rain
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by whome on
Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 12:28:36 PM AEST
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| I can feel the agony even while you are remembering the ecstasy |
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