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Blue Eyes
Contributed by
Bubbles02
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Sunday, 30th March 2008 @ 12:04:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Hey there blue eyes.
Don't tell me no lies.
I'm falling apart at the seams;
I don't need no more false hopes and dreams.
I don't know why, or even how,
but you're all I think about now.
Every night, my dreams are only of you.
To me, this is something totally new.
Used to think of you like every other guy out there.
That wasn't fair.
You're one of a kind.
And you're always on my mind.
I can't lose you.
Won't be able to.
I'm not strong...
just all wrong.
Please don't ever leave me.
Can't you see
that you're my world now?
Again, I don't know how.
It just happened.
All I have to say is...I love you.
Copyright ©
Bubbles02
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2008-03-30 12:04:45]
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Re: Blue Eyes
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by ZiggyB on
Sunday, 30th March 2008 @ 09:32:57 PM AEST
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| I liked your poem. If I really understand what I've read, let your love for each another happen by itself. Don't try to force it. You will see that it will be most rewarding. Nice write. |
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Re: Blue Eyes
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by whome on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 03:00:45 AM AEST
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I loved your poem.
When you tell him of your love, listen to the words that your heart speaks. The heart never lies or cheats, only the human mind can do that. |
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