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Peaks and Valleys
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Sunday, 30th March 2008 @ 11:16:49 AM in AEST
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Peaks and Valleys
I started off in the valley so low
It was so bad, trust me you don’t want to know
I never thought I would ever get out
Never understood what being on top was about
One day I rose to the peak
I arrived at the place that many people seek
I was the pinnacle, the provider of light
Then a turn of events put me in a bad fight
I once again sunk to the valley so low
What to expect I now know
I don’t think I will ever again get out
I will make the best of it, not sit and pout
Deadwriter
3/29/2008
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Re: Peaks and Valleys
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by shelby on
Sunday, 30th March 2008 @ 01:38:55 PM AEST
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May the peak at the top of the valley be a beautiful show. Hope filled write.
Michelle |
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Re: Peaks and Valleys
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 30th March 2008 @ 02:19:10 PM AEST
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| You will...NO...you HAVE gotten out... and this poem proves it.... Beautiful write, Deadwriter.. Welcome to YPDC...:>) |
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Re: Peaks and Valleys
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by ZiggyB on
Sunday, 30th March 2008 @ 09:39:05 PM AEST
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| What you've expressed here, is what many have endured in their lives. The valleys and peaks are what make life so interesting. You will rise from the valley, that's just the way it has to be. Make the best of the rollercoaster ride. Keep marching my friend, you are not alone. Good writing. |
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Re: Peaks and Valleys
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by damned_saint on
Sunday, 30th March 2008 @ 10:29:08 PM AEST
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hmmm..very good write.. keep it up.,,
very inspiring,.just what i needed...
~hugs
damned saint |
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Re: Peaks and Valleys
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by a7x36 on
Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 04:44:39 PM AEST
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| great message, but i wasn't liking ur word choice or devices |
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Re: Peaks and Valleys
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by Honey56 on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 11:36:22 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful write my friend in poetry~
God Bless!! |
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Re: Peaks and Valleys
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 10:11:51 PM AEST
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yeah, You got it goin on.
this is a very uplifting write.
Now will you please pm me and tell me your aka, please?
Awesome!
We need more and more of these.
big ole huggs, mucho smiles,
emy |
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Re: Peaks and Valleys
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by MajesticPoet on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 11:35:25 AM AEST
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We work so hard to get to the peak, and all to often forget that we gota fight to stay there. Dont give up though. The biggest reward of making it to the peak is knowing your earned your way there... Great write. Very insightful.
Maj |
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Re: Peaks and Valleys
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by xxILoveTheSilencexx on
Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 06:45:43 AM AEST
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wow truly inspiring.......loved it with all my heart....
=)
xxLTSxx |
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