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Breathe In, Bleed Out
Contributed by
Chloe-Sama
on
Sunday, 30th March 2008 @ 09:04:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Removed by admin due to copyright infringements, please see original poem and author at http://allpoetry.com/poem/2998062
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2008-03-30 09:04:32]
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Re: Breathe In, Bleed Out
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by angel_blue on
Sunday, 30th March 2008 @ 09:29:02 AM AEST
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| powerful and very moving. |
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Re: Breathe In, Bleed Out
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by deadwriter on
Sunday, 30th March 2008 @ 11:22:13 AM AEST
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A very powerful write. The pain screams out.
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Re: Breathe In, Bleed Out
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 30th March 2008 @ 11:59:19 AM AEST
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Hey, I like this.
I don't usually go much for the self-harming poetry. I usually find it's all pretty same-ish. But I like this. It's different, and good. The rhymes work well, and the flow is good, and it's not ghastly, like so many self harm 'poems' can be.
Well done, and welcome to YPDC. If you need any help with anything, let me know.
*hugs*
Phil xxx
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