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March Maddness
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
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Saturday, 29th March 2008 @ 05:26:56 PM in AEST
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What's wrong now
why are you always making movies
I've seen them all
so it means nothing to me,
I can see rainbow colors swirling
as you shout
my footsteps echo down the hall
as I turn and walk out,
fussing and fighting
that is all that we do
there is much confusion
as to why we are together
cause I am nothing like you,
what is the need for words
when they have no meaning
you keep saying
you need me
as you are verbally attacking.
you were talking
saying something
I know that you were
cause I seen your lips moving,
since I can't hear the words
no need to talk back
I just keep smiling
and you really hate that.
I never understand you
you are such a mystery
the games that you are playing
has me swaying
and in constant misery,
some how I keep my swerve
I'm swagarific
and that makes you mad
you're failure to emotionally torture
always makes me laugh.
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Re: March Maddness
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by FRANCO on
Saturday, 29th March 2008 @ 07:50:46 PM AEST
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My friend your sense of humor is quite obvious...
"some how I keep my swerve
I'm swagarific
and that makes you mad
you're failure to emotionally torture
always makes me laugh."
Wonderfully penned.
Regards,
FRANCO. |
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Re: March Maddness
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 01:29:55 AM AEST
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Aptly titled as there is MUCH madness in this.
You've captured emotion inside a frustrated union quite well, here.
We hold on. That's all we ever do. Even when the reason is unclear ..
familiarity .. it's the one thing that we understand. And we don't
want to lose. The alternative is sometimes just too damn frightening.
Very provocative write. Well done. :)
~Breezy
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Re: March Maddness
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 04:45:04 PM AEST
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cheatin on me,
I see how you are.
smiles,
emy |
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Re: March Maddness
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by whome on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 12:45:38 PM AEST
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Your words take me back to oh so long ago.
Or was it just the other day.
It touches the sorest portion of my soul.
Sadness and utter rejection
Contempt and fitter failure. |
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