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The dad I never had.
Contributed by
gribba
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Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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The dad I never had.
My memory of you is vague,
a hero that could do it all.
I never knew how much
your escape could do to me,
so now...
you are lost to me,
lost as a human,
blurring between
a myth or a story ones told.
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gribba
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2003-03-12 01:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The dad I never had.
(User Rating: 1 ) by ap on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 04:47:28 AM AEST (User
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its very sad... try care more for those who r with u... it will somewhat fill in the holes left by the abandonment...
luv ap:) |
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Re: The dad I never had.
(User Rating: 1 ) by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 05:17:00 AM AEST (User
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excellent little poem that speaks volumes... my past with my father is similiar... so i can also relate... your write is wonderful! |
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