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She
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Saturday, 29th March 2008 @ 01:29:24 PM in AEST
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On the breath of angels wings
With the sacred wind she sings
Born of sparkling night skies
Dashing and gone like fireflies
Timeless is her beauty and grace
Roses and lilies adorn her face
Moments like crystal dew at dawn
Memories come than move on
Hope eternally from her flows
As the sun on water glows
Passion lives in her eyes
Like the tide quickly subsides
Who is this woman of mystery?
Is she immortalized in history?
No, she lives only in his dreams
Passing like the water in raging streams
How he longs to hold her close
And of her drug take another dose
But with the morn she is gone
Flitting by then moving on
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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Re: She
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by ZiggyB on
Saturday, 29th March 2008 @ 10:57:33 PM AEST
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| I thought this was pretty-good. I rated it a four of five. Keep them coming. |
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Re: She
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by prabal77 on
Sunday, 30th March 2008 @ 03:10:24 AM AEST
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| this is damn gud man...gr88 feeling.. |
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Re: She
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 30th March 2008 @ 10:23:47 AM AEST
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| I thought this was excellent. Your rhyme scheme was pretty solid, and you captured a beauty here that I haven't read in poetry for a little while. Well done. |
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Re: She
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 04:01:57 AM AEST
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Wow Shari,
This is just beautiful. Every line is like floating
on a cloud.
Mike |
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Re: She
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by wheels on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 10:13:36 AM AEST
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It is beautiful the dream we have that we cannot hold....
kevin
the lonely vagabond
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