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loving you
Contributed by
shelby
on
Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 04:02:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Loving the way you love me.
Two people touched by our rebirth.
Spring brings forth the flowers.
Newness to two hearts and souls unite.
Rose petals know the sweet fragrance.
Unions form a circle of completeness.
Dancing into our own night-song
Our hearts beat with unison of the night.
There will be no more times apart.
Laying lonely when the night spills her stars.
We conform together lightly
slipping into one another arms.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-03-28 16:02:30]
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Re: loving you
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by emystar on
Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 05:19:02 PM AEST
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Beautifull and very sweet.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: loving you
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 10:57:31 PM AEST
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Very nice. Gives one hope.
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Re: loving you
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 29th March 2008 @ 02:08:33 AM AEST
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| Beautiful and comforting write, Michelle.... Jenni |
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Re: loving you
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 29th March 2008 @ 02:57:16 PM AEST
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sweet
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Re: loving you
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 29th March 2008 @ 05:35:52 PM AEST
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Rose petals......ahhhh.
Beautiful. |
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Re: loving you
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 30th March 2008 @ 04:55:31 AM AEST
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a very exquisite write.. lovely this is!! I love the last stanza its so magical and powerful.. lovely job!!
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: loving you
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 10:58:24 PM AEST
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Metaphysical, romantic and lusty in various parts. So beautiful and uplifting.
Laying lonely when the night spills her stars.
such a great line, Michelle, wish I'd thought it up!
Spike
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Re: loving you
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 02:02:26 AM AEST
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very pretty with beautifully flowing words...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: loving you
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by MajesticPoet on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 11:28:55 AM AEST
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Short, Sweet and to the point... Im a likin it....
MaJ |
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