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She

Contributed by BirdUnableTofFy on Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 07:13:59 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

She wakes in the dark of night
Voices in her head – too tired to pull up the fight
Not strong enough, she gives in
Again, she’s letting the voices win
Letting them scream and shout
In the silence their words seems hurtfully loud
Leading her back to what’s never really said
Thoughts – back and forth inside her head

She is lost in her own lies
She has to be strong, nobody may ever see if she cries
It’s against the rules, they say
All she can do is hide, and she may
Never be the same again – it’s a little too late
To ashamed to get seen, this was just her faith
Nothing is left inside
Not even a tiny hope she can find

she is feeling lost in her own life, she cannot hide
Only one thing can kill everything she’s feeling inside
make her lost in time, kill the pain
it’s an unbreakable chain
she is the sound of silence nobody hears
nobody sees the blood in her tears
how should she step up and be strong?
there's no point when everything goes wrong

All she really wants is to run away
In the darkness forever, herself to lay
Go to sleep and never wake up
She can’t make the little voices stop
she is so different now
everything changed – somehow
she suddenly reached the bottom, went all wrong
it has gone on for so long

she is in a special state of mind
the truth she cannot find
If she should ever get better
She would have to be light as a feather
She would have to know that people would not go
She would have the voices not to put up this show
But she can’t seem to find the way which is right
Somehow she long ago forgot how to fight

She is going under, drowning in her lies
She doesn’t care, she’s paying the price
Only one thing she can do
Only one thing can help her find a way through
People tell her it’s the wrong way
That she will have to get better one day
But she cannot let this go, it’s all she can do
Somehow, maybe one day, she can fight her way through?

Copyright Â© BirdUnableTofFy ... [ 2008-03-27 19:13:59]
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Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 10:53:56 PM AEST
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Great piece of work. I enjoyed reading it. Paints quite a picture.

The only thing that needs corrected I see is in the last stanza, second line, 'she's is'

Other than that, it is just fine.

Deadwriter

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