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December
Contributed by
Aysha
on
Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 01:58:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A crimson setting in the sky so vivid to see
The storm is over so now I am free
The warmth of the sun glowing down
on my shoulders
No more weight to endure
like a great big boulder
A daisy, a rose,a bird, and a path up ahead
Im so glad Im not eight feet under
And above all dead
I want to dance in the fields
and play in the stream
At last I believe I won't come apart at
The infamous seams
I'm smiling again like the girl you remember
When I opened my presents
Three years ago this december
Copyright ©
Aysha
... [
2008-03-27 13:58:21]
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Re: December
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by a7x36 on
Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 02:56:14 PM AEST
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regardless of whether you think the story was put together well, this was written very creatively and fluidily. i love the subtley, clever lines
you have a great style |
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Re: December
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by prabal77 on
Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 04:17:48 AM AEST
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i agree with the comment..
u r damn gud..
keep up the gud work..
all the best |
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